Feedback notes:
- "Some text is difficult to read where it blends into the shadowed side of her face." - lighten the ends of words?
- The text may look better were it lined up and justified
- "Use the negative space" - keep blank the area above her, where she is looking to imply space
- "Keep the text in two chunks so that it doesn't come across scrapbook-y"
- "The font is all the same, and all the same size, some variation would make it more interesting to look at"
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